lols read dis funny post on someone else's bloggy~ MDD derh =x its an essay.. here goes :
Looking outside my window - Describe sights, sounds & activitiesLooking outside my window, got bird, got boy. Boy eat bird, bird die.
I see a rainbow outside. It is very colourful. I am happy because it
is very beautiful. I see children playing with balls outside. All kinds
of balls. Football, basketball, baseball, ballball.
My mom and dad come into my room and sit beside me on my bed. They
look outside the window too. My mom is sitting on my right and my dad is
sitting on my left. They are happy that I am happy. Suddenly, some sparrows
flew past. Our family dog then jumped out of the window to catch some
birds.
Our dog is a very active dog. He eats a lot. He is an active dog who eats
a lot. This is why he is active. However, he is not a very clever dog because
he is mad. When he jumped out of the window to catch the birds, he
forgot that our family lives on the twenty fifth floor. Dog die. Me sad.
This is a bad day for me looking outside the window because I am sad.
I am sad because my parents just bought the dog yesterday. We are
sad. Suddenly an aeroplane flies past the window. We forget about our
dog and are very surprised because we hav never seen an aeroplane
before. As a result, we are happy because the aeroplane is exciting.
My mom is talking to me, but I continue looking out of the window. She
screams, but I still look outside the window. I am deaf because of the
large sound from the aeroplane. We are sad again, btu happy because
the rainbow is still in the sky.
This is an exciting day outside my window.
lols look at dis joker! de teacher's remark was :: has slackened. why?
lols!!
next one..
What I would like to see in my aged parents/grandparents.I am a boy. Boy is a boy. Girl is a girl but I am not a girl. Why I
am not a girl is because I am a boy. A very good boy. I have a sister
and three parents. Two mothers and one father. They are mad people and
I am their mad child. We are all mad.
When they are old, I am hoping that they hav earned a lot of money
by then. Money is money. Not money is not money. Money is good so I
like money. When they are old they will not need so much money so I
can take all their money and use.
Because of my three parents, there are more of them to take
care of each other. I can go and use all their money as they do
not need the money. They can go and play chess or sing songs together.
lols! teacher's remarks :: RE-DO. too Frivolous.
ahahahas! so~joker-ish! lols! lolololols! tummy pain lerh! don post lerh! ahahas! bbyes!!
HAHA!
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